Notes on Notes

From Jim Corner
From the Editor

About this issue
In Search of Father O

by Christopher T. George
DMR News

IBPC Noms & More
October Chills

The Reception
by Trace Estes
More Chills

Poetry Selection
for October Nights

And much more!




Greetings Mooners,

For the most part, I've been a fellow who is able to move on. Writing poems about past experiences has been a valuable exercise to examine favorite elements and decide which of those I should hold onto and those that I should let go. I remember, for example, a girl friend I lost when I was in the sixth grade. Getting reacquainted with her at my last two high school reunions and including her in the poem I wrote for the most recent reunion held in September has cleansed my childhood heart. Sound sentimental? Sure, but it works.

My estranged daughter holds me in her heart as she remembers me in her childhood. It seems very difficult for her to relate to me as I am now. Writing poetry and sending it occasionally to her has warmed our relationship. We still stand only in an email exchange, but she seems to actually enjoy the poems.

Ah, the bittersweet nature of poetry!

Jim Corner, Publisher



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About This Issue


The theme for this month's issue is Saints and Devils. What could be more appropriate for the month of October? Our contributors have stepped up to the plate with some interesting poems, stories, and articles which explore the worlds above and below.

Be sure to check out the review of Sirrus Poe's "A Mother's Supposed Love," an original short by Tracy Estes inviting us to The Reception, and Chris George's interesting look inside the inspiration for his Father O'Malley cycle featured in the Crescent Moon Journal.

It's dark out there, so grab a flashlight and walk with me awhile...




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In Search of Father O'Malley


Father O'Malley and his stories were featured in the Summer 2004 release of the Crescent Moon Journal. We asked Chris to share some insight into the creation of this cycle of poems.

In Search of Father O

Let me say up front that I am not a Catholic or even a churchgoer, and that I was brought up in a household in Liverpool, England, that had a suspicion of Roman Catholics. So, you might ask, how did I ever come to compose a cycle of poems about a priest from Sligo, Ireland, who is on a mission to an unnamed Central American country?

Well, as John Lennon wrote in his 1964 volume of Lear nonsense pieces, In His Own Write, "you might well arsk." Or, if you will allow me another Beatles reference, it's "a long and winding road."

First, although I had been brought up in an English Protestant family, on my re-emigration to the United States in 1968, after spending some years living with my grandparents in Liverpool, having been homesick after my first stint in the U.S., January 1955 to January 1960, I attended Loyola College in Baltimore, where I studied with Jesuit instructors. I also took poetry classes with the Sisters of Notre Dame next door at the College of Notre Dame, where poet Sister Maura Eichner, a particular influence on me, encouraged me to become a writer. One of her poems concerns the tragedy of a murdered nun whose body was found in a garbage dump. I continue to admire Sister Maura's poetry, with its steely realism while the poet remains open to both the beauty and the horrors of the world.

On graduation from Loyola College, I was inducted into the Alpha Sigma Nu Honor Society, an organization for honor students who had attended Jesuit colleges. A number of articles in the society's magazine, Company, on Jesuit missions in Latin America, today and in past centuries, influenced me in conceiving of a cycle of poems to feature a Catholic priest in Central America that I began in March 2003 with the poem, "At the Bend of the Rio Chuckwalla" which says something about the long held superstitions of the land that Father O'Malley had to battle in bringing Christ to the native people, the Mestites.

I hope that helps to explain the Catholic and Latin American aspects of the O'Malley series. So what about the Irish element?

In September 1992, when I was researching a book on the War of 1812 between Britain and the United States, I had to travel to Ireland for the first time. Several of the top British officers involved in the British assaults on Washington and Baltimore in 1814 were Anglo-Irish. During this time, I visited William Butler Yeats's grave at Drumcliff, County Sligo, and was impressed with the inscription on the poet's slate gray gravestone: "Cast a Cold Eye on Life, on Death, Horseman, Pass by!" The words resonated with an inscription on a monument back in Baltimore County: "How Beautiful Is Death When Earned by Virtue." As recorded on that small whitewashed obelisk one of the officers I was researching, Dublin-born Major General Robert Ross, was mortally wounded in a skirmish with the Baltimore militia on September 12, 1814. A couple of the photographs I took during my visit to Sligo feature in the O'Malley poems. A shot of poet's grave, which at the time had a beautiful spray of orange montbresia next to the gray gravestone, and an image of the swans rising from a marsh. Specifically, the swans appear before the funeral ceremony for O'Malley's father, in the next to last poem, "His Father's Funeral," and the grave with the montbresia are evoked in the final poem in the cycle, "The Word of God."

Parallel to my interest in Ireland, with all the lore and history that implies, is my interest in things ancient and primitive. A number of my poems have spoken to a totemic faith in ancient peoples. I have written about the ancient whorls on the Calder Stones of Liverpool, ancient carved boulders believed to be the remains of a chambered Neolithic tomb that stood not far from where Lennon lived on Menlove Avenue and to "Strawberry Fields" famous from the Beatles' 1966 song of that name. The whorls are similar to concentric designs in the chambered tomb in Newgrange, County Meath.

The ancient peoples of the Americas also have been of longstanding interest to me, and I have previously written about the pyramids of Central and South America in both nonfiction essays and in poetry. Although I have never been further south than Key West, Florida, I am drawn to the elements of the tropics, and the lush vegetation, the brightly colored animals and fish, have inspired me, and helped feed into my poetry.

Reading the prose of the British master Graham Greene, many of whose novels are set in the tropics, I began to conceive of a series of poems set in an impoverished land and featuring Father O'Malley, a priest from County Sligo, in the Republic of Ireland sent to work among the Mestite people of a certain Central American nation.

As with Greene's novels, although the characters and places are often fictional, the circumstances are real. Thus, O'Malley labors in an Indian village at a bend of the Rio Chuckwalla, and has to work along with the members of the oligarchy, headed by the president, General Madragal, a man reminiscent of Juan Peron, and with Archbishop Costa, a man who loves Elvis Presley along with Christ, and Mother Superior Rosario, who in her young days was Miss Los Petos, 1948. It is a poor land beset by civil war waged by the guerrillas of the September Moon insurgents led by Commissar Delgado. O'Malley himself is scarred by his experiences in his adopted land-scarred like the worn black Italian leather case of his mass kit as it bounces, "surface blotched with dampness from the jungle" in the funeral car on the way to his dad's funeral in Sligo.

I am proud to have been able to bring Father O'Malley and his world to life. I would like to think that readers of the O'Malley cycle will agree with the words of Crescent Moon Journal editor, Mustansir Dalvi, in introducing the series of poems in the Summer 2004 contest issue. Mustansir wrote: "We, at the Desert Moon were witnesses to their development, and now 'the imperfect martyr' Father O'Malley of Rio Chuckwalla, at the edge of the Mestite jungle, is flesh and blood, not mere words."

Christopher T. George




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IBPC Nominations for September 2006


I am pleased to announce the three poems going to the Interboard Poetry Competition for October as chosen by member vote.
They are:

  • "The Envelope" by Mitchell Geller
  • "The Thing about this Theory" by Yolanda Calderon-Horn
  • "Lotus Flower on #1 Train" by Guy Kettelhack

I am sure everyone joins me in wishing Mitchell, Yoly, and Guy the best of luck in the contest, and also in congratulating all of the poets whose works were nominated by members in the past month. Following is a listing of the poems nominated by poet, title, and nominator.

  • Laurie Byro - "Incubus" nominated by Guy Kettelhack
  • Yolanda Calderon-Horn - "The Thing about this Theory" nominated by Guy Kettelhack
  • Bill Flewelling - "The Country Hawks" nominated by Guy Kettelhack
  • Mitchell Geller - "The Envelope" nominated by Laurie Byro
  • Guy Kettelhack - "Lotus Flower on #1 Train" nominated by Laurie Byro
  • Guy Kettelhack - "My Mother's Black Eye" nominated by Sarah Sloat
  • Guy Kettelhack - "Why Nobody Asks Me Out Twice" nominated by Bret Addison
  • Sarah Sloat - "Europa" nominated by Guy Kettelhack
  • Marie Gail Stratford - "The Edge" nominated by Christopher T. George
  • Marie Gail Stratford - "The Pastor" nominated by Christopher T. George
  • S. Thomas Summers - "Grandfather" nominated by Marie Gail Stratford
  • S. Thomas Summers - "Lost" nominated by Yolanda Calderon-Horn

It is more than obvious that the quality of poetry written by the members of Desert Moon continues to be high, and this bodes well for future success in IBPC. Keep it up!!!


This just in: Bravo to Laurie Byro in Scooping Top Honors in September's IBPC!

Although Desert Moon took no accolades in September's Interboard Poetry Competition results, we were delighted to see DMR member Laurie Byro take top prize for "Silver Apples" representing About.com's workshop. Well done, Laurie!

Chris George



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Review: A Mother's Supposed Love


A book of poetry by Sirrus Poe

This collection offered by Mr. Poe is a frank and often brutal examination of self, of familial relationships, and the passage required to move through emotional storms that wither the soul.

Set chronologically, you are invited to share a personal journey of growth, acceptance, and self-determination. It is not an easy one. Some moments touch on the voyeuristic, and there is undoubtedly a trace of gratuitous emotionalism in the heights and depths explored. So saying, who's internal storms are not measured in peaks and valleys?

The best parts of the work are where the touch is deft. Where raw emotion is touched with insight and perhaps, a little distance:

 

attachments, except for you;
who I sucked dry before birth

killing your crave for bud
of spring. I jump from earth's face,

hoping, that before I land
you'll tell me it's okay.

(excerpt from Mother, May I?)

The subject matter is hard, though ultimately moving. The story told is unflinching in its honesty, and well worth reading.

You can find a copy of this book, and others on Sirrus' website:
http://www.sirruspoe.com/amazon.html

Charlene Dewbre



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October Chills with an Original Short Story by Trace Estes




The Reception

Unlocking the back door, Dick heaved a sigh of relief. It had been an emotional rollercoaster of a day and the idea of being able to sit down, drink a cup of coffee (possibly with a healthy dollop of Jack) and smoke the day’s first uninterrupted cigarette was the only thing that had kept him going.

With a foot halfway across the threshold, he paused. Dick never considered himself sensitive, but an uneasy feeling washed over him like a wave cresting. He stood statue-still trying to decide where the sensation was coming from. When the only answers Dick could come up with for this sense of disquiet were the events of the day or the residue of being stuck in a two-hour traffic jam, he continued inside.

Dick reached and flicked the switch for the light over the kitchen sink. With an insect-like buzzing, it fluttered to life. After throwing the deadbolt, he tossed his keys into a wicker catchall on the counter.

The day had started its downhill slide when he was dropping Nell off at preschool. Her teacher was insistent on cornering him to express her concerns with Nell’s "emotional fragility." As soon as those words were out of her mouth, Dick’s eyes glazed over.

"Mr. Jones, it’s just that it is very obvious to me that there is a void in little Nell’s life now that her mother is temporarily out of the picture."

"I was pretty sure that I explained this thoroughly once before, but just in case you didn’t get it that time I’ll say it again real slow. My wife isn’t temporarily out of the picture. She’s been edited out. She was committed after numerous attempts to kill me. The last time she came after me with an iron. And it may sound heartless, but I’m glad that Nell has a chance to feel that emotional void, ‘cause after Jane tried to kill me, she went after Nell."

"And if you’re hearing steel creep into my voice, it’s because I hate being in this situation. I hate having to explain to total strangers like you that my wife is a committed paranoid schizophrenic. I hate having to hear Nell cry when she misses her mom and then wake up screaming from a nightmare where her mom is trying to kill her."

"Oh, Mr. Jones. I’m so sorry. It wasn’t my intention to bring up all this pain again," she said with an I’ve-got-dirt-for-the-lunchroom glint in her eyes.

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More Chills: Original Poetry


A Scrap Found
during an Archaeological Dig
in the Los Angeles Fallout Zone


To those who excavate
these mounds, raising
our corpses for the autopsy
which is history, I offer
this confession, this fragment
of belated truth: War is hard, but peace
is harder.

-- Fred Longworth

 

GHOST/SLIDE/BY

Did you feel that ghost slide by,
lover mine,
slide by as cold damp air
outside the room we shared
not long ago?

Did you feel that ghost slide by?

We are not young, lover mine,
nor ever will be
again,
never again will be,
but do we care?

Feel the ghost slide by, shadow upon us here.

Will you greet or turn from him?
Smile or fear?
All things, say ghosts, yet live, and he is ours.

Shadow upon us here.

Spirit and ghost and shadow, take us, here.

Now take us, lover mine,
if we would go.
How can we know?
Do you feel our ghost slide by
as we love here?

There is no time, and yet all time is ours.
Lover mine, accept me now.
Our ghost is me.
Feel my gauzy breath,
this dark month of your heart
and know that I am near.

Lover mine,
shadow upon us here,
feel your ghost slide by
and know that I am near...

-- Robert Ward

 

Four Candles

White linen covers the altar; shadows play
intermittently in November's chill; flame

for each passing, for one carelessly forgotten.
All is dead but love. Garlands and wreaths

lend their Fragrance, lead the umbra home.
Rejoice: we have faced another year of life.

Old shiny bald skull, you missed us again.

--James D. Corner
 

Things that go Bump in the Night

The lights are turned out,
everyone's sound asleep,
startled awake by a nightmare,
Eek! My skin starts to creep!

The walls so familiar
spring from shadows into ghosts,
and the creak of old boards
stands my hair up the most.

All I want to do now
is run for my mother,
but what of THE THING
under the bed taking cover?

Do I dare take the chance
that my feet won't get grasped?
I can't stay here alone
so I dart off at last.

Now who of us has forgotten
this common child-like fear?
I sit back and laugh now
but, ooooh, what do I hear?

The scrambling sound
of my own children's feet.
Better scoot over quick
and throw back the sheet.

-- Barbara Ostrander




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